she holds her tounge

so she cant say whats really on her mind

she wishs she could say but she cant

she knows it will only hurt

she still loves him

but she dont want to anymore

but everytime she trys it only hurts more

she has bite marks on her tounge from all the things she never has said

You rhymed 'more' with 'more'

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poetry don't have to rhyme..there are different styles of poetry and not all of poetry rhymes

however, she is right. not all poetry has to rhyme.

thank kiki finally somebody actually agrees with me. And blingmaster I have taken a class on poetry so i think i know a little bit more then you why don't you pay attention in english class or go ask an english teacher before you say someone is wrong.

woooo go u